Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 March 2020
Easter
For R.E. we had to watch a video and summarise the key points. My Summary is below this text.
Have you ever written a summary before?
The Jewish Leaders and teachers didn’t like what Jesus was doing or how he called himself The Son of God. They made a plan to arrest Jesus. Judas one of Jesus’s disciples agreed to betray Jesus and give him over to the religious leaders for some money. Jesus was praying and Judus showed the man who Jesus was. Jesus was arrested. Jesus was presented to the high council and they asked him if he was the Messiah, savior of the dews. They protested that Jesus was guilty and he deserved to die. They took Jesus before the Roman ruler. Pilot didn’t think that Jesus had done anything wrong, Pilot said he would punish him and then release him. Jesus was hurt and spat on him. His clothes were torn and taken from him and they also gave him a crown made from thorns. He was hurt so bad that he could barely stand by himself. He was then forced to carry his own cross so far up a mountain that he needed help to carry it. Once Jesus made it to the place he was going to be crucified. While he was on the cross many people shouted to him “If you are the Son of God then save yourself”. But Jesus knew he had to die to save the people. At noon darkness crossed the whole land 3 hours went by and Jesus took his final breath. A soldier who had watched the whole thing said “He really was the Son of God”. Then a righteous man came and put Jesus’s body in a tomb, 3 days passed and nothing really happened. But very early on Sunday two women who cared for Jesus went to visit his body and found his tomb empty. And that he was no longer there. An angel appeared and said “Don’t be afraid, he is not here he has risen”. The women remembered that Jesus had told them that he would rise again. They ran to go tell the disciples what they had heard and seen. Then for the next 40 days Jesus appeared to his disciples and many others and showed them that he was alive and well.He taught them that what he did was the only way to be forgiven and be with God for ever.
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Hi Jennah,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job of summarising and retelling the events in your own words. I like how the summary flows and makes sense. That makes reading it so much easier. Why do you think the women ran to tell the disciples?
How would you feel if you were Jesus in this time?