Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 14 May 2019
Persuasive writing (Chromebook)
I think I did a pretty good job persuading her. In my list of things to persuade her I said that you will look cooler than Tom Cruise and things like your brain will explode and I have a really cool background.
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Hi Jennah,
ReplyDeleteSome great persuasive reasons here ;)
I love the online shopping one!
Did Miss Holland buy one in the end?, did you do enough to persuade her?
Ps - Tom Cruise cool? Really? Lol
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Thank you for your great feed back
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