Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 4 July 2019
SAVE the freshwater seals!
Help save the freshwater seals.
The freshwater seals are dying soon we are going to lose the freshwater seals.
There are only 360 left, the seals require snowbanks if seals give birth to there pups on the ice there babies could die of the cold or get eaten by predators.
The world wildlife fund is trying to save the freshwater seals but they can' t do it without your help.
So far the world wildlife fund group have created some snow banks to help the animals give birth in them and to snuggle up in them.
This is just a temporary solution we need your help for a permanent solution.
There hasn' t been mentions on there success a the moment.
Do you have a solution?
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Hi Jennah i liked how you write why we need to save them and what is happening to them and whats bad about it and that you have a question to tell people if they have a solution to help the freshwater seals. maybe next time write how and hwy they are dying.
ReplyDeletethanks for your comment charlee
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