Monday 15 June 2020

A 2nd snippet of writing

Here is another snippet of my writing, well it is just another paragraph from my story.
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Then Iguana got off the couch and noticed Sally bobbing up and down in her bowl. Sally was a blue sparkly seahorse. Iguana kept his eye on Sally then as he was inches away from Sally’s bowl, he licked his lips. Sally stood intimidated by Iguana and started crouching in the corner. Iguana’s hand crept into the bowl and pulled out Sally by the tail. He opened his mouth. His throat was gravelly and he dropped Sally in his gravelly throat. Sally soared down yelping like a lost dog.  
Iguana started choking and Pony tried to get Iguana to cough out Sally but he refused.

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