My Narrative

W.A.L.T. write an engaging narrative.
Here is my full narrative, it is about a Pony called Spy Pony.
I have finished my story as well as the editing.
I liked writing the story because it has character.
Do you like make believe stories?

Spy Pony!

Bang! Bang!, “Come on Pony open up.” Spy Pony gets up off the couch. Though he moved
as slow as a snail. His ruby red cape  was all creased. Spy Pony is a superhero pony. His
mother was Hoove Lady. Hoove Lady was very famous for the incredible save. A baby hippo
weighing 100 pounds once fell out of a 5 story window. She was just walking to get lunch when
the baby hippo fell, she caught the baby. It was the save of the century.  

Spy Pony also known as Pony was very odd. He wore a sock around his head as a mask, he dyed
his tail blue. Most of all he could talk. But that is not strange compared to what happens later on in
the story. 

Ponies house was like the opposite of a modern house.  It was like a little shack but big. His carpet
had holes in it from when Super Evil Kitty stayed over. She sprayed acid everywhere. Evil Kitty also
left claw marks on the couch. The couch was a rustic colour with burgundy patterns. Ponies roof was
the worst of all, it was very patchy and open.

“Pony I don’t have all day, open the door.” Pony reached the door, he very slowly unlocked the security
chain and opened the door. Evil Iguana burst in and knocked poor Pony off his feet. 

“Whatever, sorry Pony” said Iguana. “I have to stay here, Mrs Evil Iguana is going to kill me,” Iguana
added frantically.”  Iguana had green scales with little spikes on his back. He was not a superhero, he
was a villain. Pony didn’t mind Iguana that much. Though Bird Boy despised him. Bird Boy once was
the best superhero ever, now he has critical injuries. Iguana once ate his bony legs. He had to get
robotic legs.

“I accidentally knocked over her award for being Evil. She found out and is now carrying a blow torch
looking for me.” Iguana added. “Just apologise Iguana” Said Pony trying to get Iguana out of the house.
“Nope, I live here now.” Pony sighed with a big huff and went to grab some cola. He came back out
and crashed back on the couch. They talked about Global Warming and how they are cutting down
on hay prices.

Then Iguana got off the couch and noticed Sally bobbing up and down in her bowl. Sally was a blue
sparkly seahorse, and was the cutest pet of them all.  Iguana kept his eye on Sally then as he was
inches away from Sally’s bowl, he licked his lips. Sally stood intimidated by Iguana and started
crouching in the corner. Iguana’s hand crept into the bowl and pulled out Sally by the tail. He
opened his mouth. His throat was gravelly and he dropped Sally in his gravelly throat. Sally
soared down yelping like a lost dog.  

Iguana started choking and Pony tried to get Iguana to cough out Sally but he refused.

Then Pony got Iguana to go to the bathroom, he told Iguana to sit on the toilet and try to poop out Sally.
Pony eagerly slammed the bathroom door and bounced to the couch. After maybe 13 minutes
of groaning from the bathroom and carrot shreds flying on the ground, Iguana came out. A piece
of toilet paper was stuck to his foot. Pony slightly shifted his head to look at Iguana. “Any luck Iguana?”
Asked Pony, not very inquisitive though. “Nope, lunch has set at the bottom of my stomach”.
Chuckled Iguana. 

Once Pony finished brainstorming ideas he came up with some options.

1. We get a surgeon to cut open your stomach and we retrieve Sally.
2. You sneeze with your nose blocked and you turn inside out and Sally falls to the ground.
3. The only negative is that all your organs fall out to.
4. Last but not least, I put my hoof down your throat and pull out Sally.

 “I chose the throat, but there is another way to retrieve Sally by putting up my hoof, but that
will be the very last option” Said Pony desperately.

“Yeah, Pony we are not doing the first two.” “Number 3 it is.” Pony hesitated. Pony sanitised
his hoof and pulled back Iguana’s head and stuck his hoof down his throat. “This is me literally
touching a tuna fish salad right now.” gulped Pony. Iguana groaned and complained a lot.
Unfortunately after 14 tries they gave up. “That was like a taser down my throat.” Pony
re-sanities his hooves and then re- re-sanitises his hooves. 

Then it came to Pony. “I have got the best idea in the world!” exaggerated Pony.

Pony and Iguana arrived at the pet store and went straight to the fishy section. There she was
a blue sparkly Seahorse all alone. Iguana rushed to the counter and ordered the Seahorse,
where Pony shrugged along. After 10 minutes Pony finally reached the counter.He was huffing
and puffing all the way there, by the end he was exhausted. His face was bright red and he looked
like he needed an inhaler. 

Iguana shoved Pony to the side and grabbed a plastic bag for Sally 2.0. The lady at the counter
had a strong smell of bubble gum. She had a lip piercing and a big chin hair. She wasn’t too
enthused to sell them a fish. They fished out Sally from the tank and put her in a bag that was
filled with water. 

Once at home they put Sally 2.0 in her new bowl and gave her some fish flakes. They
slouched back on the couch. “Well, that was something new,” said Iguana. “Something new,”
Pony replied with. “Also Pony, you need to go to the gym if you want to put me in prison”.
“Hahahahahaha Iguana, very funny. Very funnnnnyyyyy”.

The End