Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 23 June 2020
Another Snippet of my writing
Soon I will post my hole entire story to my blog.
Do you like my story so far?
Then Pony got Iguana to go to the bathroom, he told Iguana to sit on the toilet and try to poop out Sally. Pony eagerly slammed the bathroom door and bounced to the couch. After maybe 13 minutes of groaning from the bathroom and carrot shreds flying on the ground, Iguana came out. A piece of toilet paper was stuck to his foot. Pony slightly shifted his head to look at Iguana. “Any luck Iguana?” Asked Pony, not very inquisitive though. “Nope, lunch has set at the bottom of my stomach”. Chuckled Iguana.
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