Wednesday 1 September 2021

The Senses story

Today for Reading I did a Senses story from Haora's view. It means that I use the 5 senses to write a story. Smell, Taste, Sight, Touch, Hearing. I think I did a good job, have a look below this and read it. Tell me if you like it, do you like it?



1 comment:

  1. Wow Jennah, you have a way with words. You are a great descriptive writer.

    I really like how you have added more than just he saw this and heard that. You paint a picture in our heads.

    You definitely did a good job!

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