between U.S.A and Mexico.
American-Mexican border. The people were heading to America to find jobs and better life.
Do you agree or disagree?
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Hi Jennah my name is Marcus from Owairaka school and I'm in Room 23.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explained why you don't like the way how Donald Trump built the wall between USA and Mexico. Maybe try to add a little more information.
you should visit blog at odsmarcusf.blogspot.com.
Bye!
Hi Marcus, thank you for your feedback.
DeleteNext time I will add more information to my blog post.
Hi Jenneh my name is William from Room 23 @ Owairaka District School, I really liked how you put this in paragraphs. If I had a word with Donald trump I will ask them to bust the wall down ,Anyway Thanks for sharing your learning.
ReplyDeleteYou should check out my blog (https://odswilliamk.blogspot.com/)
blog you later.
Hi William, thank you so much for your positive feedback.
DeleteI like what you said about what you would do about the wall.