Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 3 December 2019
Teaser wk Lorde
Do you like it?
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Jennah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post as you have explained at the beginning what the purpose of the blog post is. So many students do not do this.
I love reading as well, John Grisham is my favourite author at the moment. Who is your favourite author?
Next time maybe you could look at lining up your text so the poster looks more balanced and uses the space better.
Nga mihi,
Mark
Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteThank you for giving me advice about my text and the compliment.
I do not have a favourite author because I read a lot of different books.