Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 3 January 2020
A Whakatauki
Ehara taku toa i te toa takitahi engari he toa takitini.
Which means, I come not with my own strengths but bring with me the gifts, talents and strengths of my family, tribe and ancestors.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Jennah,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing poster for your chosen Whakatauki. I like how you have included the phrase in both Te Reo and in English and the images you included. Did you draw the set of weights and the present yourself?
I also really like how you have included a heap of colours to appeal to your readers. What does your chosen Whakatauki mean to you? To me it means when we participate we offer the skills of ourselves, our forefathers, and all those who have influenced us. I think that’s such a cool idea, after all we are just a matter of our environments.
Have you considered increasing the size of your text? Particularly the size of the English translation to appeal more to your readers.
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon