Writing, for writing today I had to create a DLO teaching others about metaphors. I had to include 4 examples, my own picture, a metaphor in a song and the definition. Making the picture was very fun but getting the shape was more difficult. I do not mind doing metaphors but I find doing similes easier, but learning metaphors would make it easier to use them though. Here is my DLO.
Do you think this would help others? Do you like the rainbow background? Do you like the cat? Do you think the cat should be smaller and the words bigger?
Hey Jennah, I love this DLO it stands out and definitely catches my attention. I love how you have clearly stated what it is about and explained using a clear definition.
ReplyDeleteYour examples are great. I love the one about the girl being a hurricane.
I look forward to seeing metaphors in your writing!
The cat is great, I would think about making the words a bit bigger or use a different font.
Aloha Miss Holland,
DeleteThanks for the feedback, next time I will make the text bigger and go for a clearer font.
I love your positive comments.
From Jennah