Murray Mustachio

W.A.L.T. Analyse characters and create a description
For Writing today I wrote 3 paragraphs explaining my shoemaker of choice. There were 2 shoemakers to choose from a tall evil one and a nice short one. I chose nice. Then I had to make an image. The 3 paragraphs are first so you can imagine him and then there is the picture.
I hope you enjoy it, once you have read the text and seen the picture can you add anymore description of the character?
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Hi There reader,

This is a story I wrote about my friend Murray Mustachio. He owns a shoe shop in Paris. You will
find all about him in my 4 paragraphs. In the paragraphs you will find out what games he plays, his
family, shop and his appearance. Keep reading on to find out more.

Murray Mustachio is the owner of shoes for yous. He could not think of any other fitting rhyming word.
He makes all the great shoes that last longer than that grouchy man across the road. In Murray's spare
time he likes to play knucklebones with his shoe pals. He tends to beat them normally since they
always get the knucklebone stuck in the hole where you put your foot in. He also likes to play jump rope
with the spare shoe laces in his shop. His record is about 3 so far. His friend Boot can jump 8. Where
his Jordan can only do about… 35. He keeps practicing his jump rope but every time he lands on the
rope all the shoes laugh, especially the pink high heel. He is great with his games. He also just started
learning how to play the tuba, and he introduced a new game to the shoes. It is called jump squats. He
jumps and then squats, then he laughs as the shoes fall on their souls.

Murray isn’t much of a family man, he barely remembers when his own mother's birthday is. Luckily
his sister Evelyn-Peterson (yes here first name is Evelyn-Peterson. She goes by Petey though)
reminds him because they always do a joint gift. Normally, Murray makes a pair of shoes and Petey
makes the card. Petey will sign for Murray as well and Murray will put her initials along with his on the
soul. They make a great team, together. Murray’s father, James is an old rude guy. He despises
Evelyn-Peterson. Which is sad because she is as sweet as a gum drop. He says that she needs to
get a job instead of being a makeup artist. He also said that she wasn’t going to have a life if all she
did was put cosmetics on peoples faces. Where their Mom says that she is going to strive for greatness
and she will make a great career and be loved by all the ugly people.

Murray’s shop is a very old shop. It was built in the 1800’s by an 1800 year old tree chopper.
The house has a lot of rusty pieces though. He lives there so there is a kitchen in the back but it is
all stained and has mold in every single crack in sight. The mold had a growth spurt.

The rats don’t even tend to go in the kitchen because it is covered in decay. The shelfs that hold all
the shoes have holes from where the termites chewed down on. His shop is the size of a hobbit hole
where his bedroom is the kitchen. The maximum capacity is 3 at a time. They always do family
reunions in England where his parents live because they have a huge mansion. They don’t give money
to their kids though, they put it in an inheritance.

Finally Murray’s appearance.

Murray has a thick moustache, hence the name Mustachio. It comes from the dads in the
Mustachio family. His glasses are square lense glasses with stiff borders. Don’t get me started on his
hair. His hair is swished to all degrees and it is dark hazel. With his shoes they are brown with a pointy
front and a high heel at the back. Now with his eyebrows that is a whole nother story. They are like thin,
brown icing stripes which match his brown eyes. He wears a crisp blue button up shirt with a brown old
apron.