Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 20 April 2020
Dazzling Definitions
I aslo added a picture of my front door because it is covered in poppies to remind people of ANZAC.
Do you like the Poppies?
2 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Jennah, ka pai on creating a DLO that captures our attention. I was wondering what do they words have to do with Anzac Day? I would love it if you could add a couple of sentences to your blog post explaining what it has to do with Anzac day and why these words are important.
ReplyDeleteYou have done well with following the 6 steps of creating a quality blog post, which step are you missing?
P.s. I love what you have done with your front door. Did the whole family help create it?
Hi Miss Holland
ReplyDeleteThanks for your awesome comment.
I really appreciate how you add suggestions for my work, I will take it into consideration. Maybe I can make a blog post explaining what the words mean. Thanks (about the door), my mum, brother and I did the door together.
From Jennah