Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
Pretty Poppies
For Reading today we are to..... make an advertisement sort of thing for poppies. We have to advertise them so more people will get poppies or celebrate it more. We had to make a DLO, this is mine. Do you like my poppies? I traced them myself.
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I do like your poppies, it looks like the actual image that you get online. So well done you!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have said why people should by a poppy and why you should celebrate poppy day.
Annyeonghaseyo Miss Holland
DeleteThank you for your terrific comment. I really appreciate how you take time out of your day sot comment on peoples posts.
From Jennah