Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
How to take care of a dog
Do you have a dog?
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Jennah,
ReplyDeleteI am so impressed with your instructions. You have put in a lot of effort and have followed the success criteria.
I really like how you have explained your instructions with enough detail that anyone can follow it.
What was your favourite part of doing this task?
I don't have a dog but you and some other students are making me want one!
Hello Miss Holland,
DeleteI really appreciate how you comment on my blogs, Miss Holland.
My favourite part of doing this task was definitely finding the pictures to go with the text.
If you ever got a dog I know you would love having one, they are so friendly and make people smile. Did you know that dogs can smell feelings?
I put heaps of effort into it because I really like dogs.
From Jennah