Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
The Land of Stories Worlds Collide
This chapter I read to day was about:
Conner and Bree got everyone into there seats ready t take flight. Bree said ¨Conner I have something to say it is very serious¨ ¨go on Bree I can handle anything¨. ¨Okay so when I went to Connecticut Emmerich and I went to a castle. At the castle there was a mirror, Mother Goose had put a spell on the portal so anyone who didn´t have magic in their blood couldn´t come back through the portal. Emmerich and I went through the portal together but we were both able to come back. So I went to see my family in Connecticut and talked to them. They said I was related to the Brothers Grimm. And it was true. Since Emmerich is my cousin she made it through. My family also has a group called the sisters Grimm and they can create portals from the Fairy-tale world to the Otherworld. One day they noticed people going from the fairy-tale land to the Otherworld without their help. They discovered it wasn´t magic but it was science. They say every so often the Fairly-tale world and the Otherworld collide and make portals to access each other. Sooner or later the worlds were going to collide permanently and instead of a portal they are going to have a bridge from the Otherworld. It is going to be in the middle of New York. That was all I read today. Are you writing any stories lately?
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Oh wow, imagine finding out you are related to the Brothers Grimm, how would you feel if you were told that?
ReplyDeleteThey have some very interesting stories!
Hi Miss Holland,
DeleteIf I was told I was related to the Brothers Grimm I would be... very shocked and surprised.
From Jennah
Nope I’m not writing anything at the
ReplyDeleteMoment - but I am still reading my book (when I get time 😂) Great over view of your book 👍
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Mum
Hi Mum,
DeleteI hope you get more time to read your book.
Thanks for your compliment.
From Jennah