For Writing today I was to write instructions for how to brush my teeth and make an infographic to go with it. My Instructions are above the DLO. Have you ever made and instructional writing before?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 20 April 2020
Instructions and Infographic
For Writing today I was to write instructions for how to brush my teeth and make an infographic to go with it. My Instructions are above the DLO. Have you ever made and instructional writing before?
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Hi Jennah, fantastic job on creating such clear instructions with a great visual infographic! I really like how you have used some of time connectives. Make sure that you remember to use adverbs and imperative verbs with your instructions.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you could be more specific on how to brush your actual teeth. How could you explain that for younger kids so they know how to brush them properly.
Keep up your great work.
P.S your infographic is off the page.
Hi Miss Holland
DeleteThank you very much,
next time I will add adverbs and imperative verbs.
I will go and fix my DLO so it is on the page properly.
From Jennah