Wednesday 29 April 2020

Quickwrite

For Quick write today I wrote a very long story in my book. It was about a girl named Rebecca who sits by herself at lunch and then Bree comes over and sits beside her and then they become best friends. What story are you writing lately? Are you writing a story lately?

2 comments:

  1. What a great story line. I really like the sound of this Bree. What is she like? What does she look like? Have you got a title for your story. Maybe next time you could take a photo of your writing and put it on your blog as I would love to read it.

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    1. Bula Miss Holland
      I love it how you comment on my posts.
      I do not have a title for my story, yet.
      I chose Bree because that is one of my favourite days.
      Bree is a young 12 year old girl who feels for Rebecca.
      Bree has brown wavy hair with green eyes, she likes to wear black skirts and yellow hoodies.
      From Jennah

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