Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
Quickwrite
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
What a great story line. I really like the sound of this Bree. What is she like? What does she look like? Have you got a title for your story. Maybe next time you could take a photo of your writing and put it on your blog as I would love to read it.
ReplyDeleteBula Miss Holland
DeleteI love it how you comment on my posts.
I do not have a title for my story, yet.
I chose Bree because that is one of my favourite days.
Bree is a young 12 year old girl who feels for Rebecca.
Bree has brown wavy hair with green eyes, she likes to wear black skirts and yellow hoodies.
From Jennah