Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 28 April 2020
The Battle Of Gallipoli
For Reading today we are to create a DLO that lists 10 facts about the Battle of Gallipoli.
I found it fun looking through the text to try and find it. Here is my slideshow. Do you have any family members that went to the Gallipoli war?
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Hi Jennah, Awesome to hear you had fun finding out about the battle of Gallipoli. Next time would be good if the text was a wee bit bigger was a bit hard to read
ReplyDeleteHi Melissa,
DeleteI did not know the text was to small but next time I will make it bigger.
Thanks for commenting, Melissa.
From Jennah
Hi Jennah,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on listing the facts about Gallipoli, was there any facts that stood out to you?
Next time you may want to change the size of your font as it is hard to read.
I had a few of my great-grandfathers were a part of the war, two were rifle men and another was a firefighter. Did you have any relatives in the war?
Aloha Miss Holland.
DeleteThe fact that stood out to me was... was about the evacuation.
I do not think I had anyone in the war, I am be wrong thoguh.
From Jennah